In last class we wrote about "Blue". How do we feel when we hear that word? What kind of emotion does it create in our memory or our feelings? I wrote to describe blue for a blind young boy who asks to understand concept of color in general.
I know he is blind, and young, but my consideration is if my writing is clear to show that, and you as a reader
find it easy to get?
Blue
Sky is blue, I said. He shook his foot to clean the sands off, and told me" I have heard it all the time, sky is blue, sea is blue my eyes are blue, but I want to feel that, how is blue"? He sat next me with a big question that every body could see on his wrinkled forehead of his eyebrows. "I knew that face with those line on the forehead, he would not let me go before I answered him" I thought.
I said It was like swimming in the ocean, and.... He caught me, "Swimming is cold and wet!" I looked at him, in his blowing hair on the air which at the moment were orange of the sun set color. I closed my eyes and said to him "blue is going in a road that never ends, blue is a dream that you go after it when you are awake".
He said so, blue is inside me"
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